Those pgrens in green/building cover really messed up your conscripts. IMO you should have tried to flank them more and pressure them with your greater numbers. You teched snipers to combat the grens. IMO, getting the conscript upgrade would have worked better, and then you could've teched for tank hunters. Also, you were a bit reckless with your vehicles. If you're up against panzerschrecks, kite them, and if your vehicle is down to less than one more schreck worth of health, get it out for healing. Also, by the end you were floating a lot of muni. You probably should have chosen a path that would let you make more use of it, perhaps fewer vehicles and more infantry upgrades.